Author Topic: Someone wanna proof read my Back on Track submission before I turn it in?  (Read 1681 times)

Twinkles

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Hey! I could really use some help editing my back on track submission. My grammar has been atrocious at time, but even a content check would be awesome. More than anything else though -- double check my facts. I'd hate to embarrass myself turning it in and find out half my stuff is wrong.
So, what I need is the following

Brush up on grammer

Checking my facts

Things I should add or remove (I think I had some run on moments)

and, if i should spice it up a bit more.

It discusses the paladin's first circle ability, Knowing. Despite being a back on track article, I couldnt help making it narrated from an instructor in "Hallows institute of paladinhood."

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ku8jOdm1YAmCo7xj8zAUmqq58kgSXObNbq8bWlYnyI/edit
It would be awesome if you guys could just leave comments right on the document. Thanks in advance!

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Warning: you have asked the son of a contract lawyer, who was also an English minor.  Comment-editing incoming in avalanche-worthy quantities.

Twinkles

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What have I done.

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Thanks a lot though!